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Firsty, if you want to post things here you're meant to review 2 things before you post anything. So review 2 things then post 1 thing, review 2 more and ...

Firsty, if you want to post things here you're meant to review 2 things before you post anything. So review 2 things then post 1 thing, review 2 more and ...

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :shock: :shock: First of all the good news. the story has a good plot but the last part gave me a little anger against the character. Anyway. They story ...

I wrote this a few months ago and thought about going back to it. Chapter 1 Book one Part 1 Charles stood in front of the black water of the ...

Charles stood in front of the black water of burcach lake, the area around it was well know as ’death follow’s. Living up to its name, everything around it was ...

I liked how good you used it in first person, its really nice. You really should write some more, you can be super good someday. But I do have a ...

I agree with orange nail polish as well, but it was kinda weird to read. The sentences were spread apart alot and there was un usage in paragraphs, i liked ...

Very nice, i liked the story, it was interesting.

Fantasy mainly, and thanks.

I just joined YWS and I do like it, but it says i have to write two reviews before posting your work, I've looked around the forums and I don't ...

Very well done, loved it lots. :D

I'm brand new to YWS, just joined today. Thought I would stop by to say hello.

Ok, this is an old story I worked on well over a year ago, and about 3 months ago i rewrited the chapter, I've gone through a bunch of stories ...